Sazae-san [Part 1]

Apr 10, 2016 12:00
Today, I will talk about the Japanese national animation "Sazae-san."

Sazae-san has been broadcasted since 1969, and this year is 46th anniversary.

The number of broadcasts and episodes exceed 2350 and 7000, respectively.

Sazae-san entered the Guinness Book of World Records as the longest running animated TV series.

Sazae-san is one of slice-of-life anime, and the characteristic is to do rock-paper-scissors at the end of the broadcast.

Also, any DVDs of Sazae-san haven't been released with the author's wishes.

Therefore, there are many episodes that we can't watch again.

Continue to Part 2.
サザエさん [Part 1]

今日は日本の国民的アニメ、サザエさんを紹介します。

サザエさんは1969年から放送が始まり、今年で46年目になります。

放送回数は2350回、話数は7000話を超えています。

最も長く放映されているTVアニメとして、ギネスブックにも載りました。

サザエさんは日常系のアニメで、放送の最後にじゃんけんをするのがこのアニメの特徴の一つです。

また、サザエさんは、作者の意向により、一切DVDなどが発売されていません。

そのため、もう二度と見ることができない話が多数あります。

Part2 に続きます。
No. 1　b1y2a3t's correction
  • Sazae-san has been broadcasted since 1969, and this year is 46th anniversary.
  • Sazae-san has been broadcasted since 1969, and this year is its 46th anniversary.
  • The number of broadcasts and episodes exceed 2350 and 7000, respectively.
  • The number of scbreeningoadcasts and episodes exceed 2350 and 7000, respectively.
    　Good sentence! 'Screenings' or 'showings' sounds a bit more natural
  • Sazae-san is one of slice-of-life anime, and the characteristic is to do rock-paper-scissors at the end of the broadcast.
  • Sazae-san is one of slice-of-life anime, and the chatractdemaristick is to do rock-paper-scissors at the end of the broadcast.
    　To say a characteristic that defines something you can say 'Trademark'
  • Also, any DVDs of Sazae-san haven't been released with the author's wishes.
  • Also, anyo DVDs of Sazae-san haven't been released withper the author's wishes.
    　With works but per is a very high level word that will make your writing sound great
  • Therefore, there are many episodes that we can't watch again.
  • Therefore, there are many episodes that youwe can't watch again.
    　When talking about a general statement, use 'you' in informal language and 'one' in more formal language
Fantastic. You right really well. Origato
b1y2a3t
Whoops. I should say "you write really well"
Toru
Thank you very much for the corrections and your kind explanations!
I'm glad to hear you say that (^^)
No. 2　Kwang Ming (クアン　ミン）'s correction
  • Today, I will talk about the Japanese national animation "Sazae-san."
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Sazae-san has been broadcasted since 1969, and this year is 46th anniversary.
  • Sazae-san has been broadcasted since 1969, and this year is its 46th anniversary.
  • The number of broadcasts and episodes exceed 2350 and 7000, respectively.
  • The number of broadcasts and episodes have exceeded 2350 and 7000, respectively.
    　Present Perfect is needed: True in the past, still ongoing in the present.
  • Sazae-san entered the Guinness Book of World Records as the longest running animated TV series.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Sazae-san is one of slice-of-life anime, and the characteristic is to do rock-paper-scissors at the end of the broadcast.
  • Sazae-san is a slice-of-life anime and its broadcast finale is characterised by its trademark rock-paper-scissors.
    　Either broadcast finale or end of each episode
  • Also, any DVDs of Sazae-san haven't been released with the author's wishes.
  • Also, despite the longevity of the series, Sazae-san, in accordance with the author's wishes, has seen no DVD release.
    　If I understand it correctly, I would write it this way.
  • Therefore, there are many episodes that we can't watch again.
  • Therefore, there are many episodes that we can't be watched again.
  • Continue to Part 2.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
An anime with a long history. Hmm, interesting.
Toru
Thank you so much always for correcting my post! :)
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